I did post one haiku a few months ago, but it was bad, no use linking... I read a little about haiku yesterday, and I thought, lets try writing some. I had to have inspiration moments, the so-called "haiku moments", and i didn't have many... :) Anyway, here's one:
bulb falling to blip
is easy falling in love
with falling darkness
Some Physics Haiku...
(a quantum mech haiku: first of it's kind! ;) )
particle approach
measuring apparatus
wavefunction collapse
lens system: solve it
f 1 19, f2 10
distance between: 12
no F then no a
(inertial frame) F equals ma
action equals reaction
Finally, if you have read my limericks, you must have noticed that i dont pay attention to syllables. But Haiku (actually, Charmaine) forced me to pay attention to syllables... but here are two haikus (well, not haikus) I wrote in frustration:
haiku is difficult
limericks are a piece of cake
anonick not care for the damn syllables
there was a man from japan
who found haiku too hard
but his lims didn;t rhyme
and were incorrect
so he called it five-ku
Finally:
nothing is working
life, haiku, clock, poetry
without a battery
I hope I improve! ;-) Feedback appreciated. :) Dont be too rough, it's my first time...
17 April, 2007
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Personally, I am not too found of Haiku. But the F=ma one was quite good, I believe. Stick to lims, or try writing a Haiku poem, that way, you will get a lot of practice.
ReplyDeleteLol! You're improving :)
ReplyDeleteBut yeah, stuck to lims. They're more entertaining and you don't get nearly as frustrated :)
Okay, very weird..no-one seems to have similar opinions as I do
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the haiku. Please don't stick to lims.
Haiku is somewhat refereshing. It's also more difficult to understand..atleast for me-and when unravelled is much more fascinating than a limerick.
Don't know much about the physics one but the first one was brilliant.
Keep exploring!
Giggles! I feel privilaged, I witnessed parts of the creative process of the first one :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I reconsidered. I think you should expand your horizons a bit. Your lims lately have been a bit... forced, maybe you need a break from them. And you writing haiku is pretty entertaining (at least your frustration is... :P)
Hi.. was just surfing thru d pages.. stopped at ur blog to read ur haikus,I must appreciate ur trial..good going , keep it up !
ReplyDeleteHi.. was just surfing thru d pages.. stopped at ur blog to read ur haikus,I must appreciate ur trial..good going , keep it up !
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