04 December, 2008

It Could Happen to You (A new Story)


 I personally think I'm getting better at this humourous-story business. But I'd like your feedback. Do comment. :)

9 comments:

  1. it could happen to me?

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  2. I liked it, though I found it pretty silly(NOT cute! If you are a girl AND you think it was cute get yourself a voodoo psychotherapist.). If a girl can be as retarded so as to talk about relationships of characters on TV shows that have long been taken off air at dinner tables, there is a pretty good chance that conversations in bed might be discussions on Lindsay Lohan's drinking problem. Dump her down a tubewell, dude.

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  3. Lol. It wasn't meant to be cute, it was just meant to be funny, and the end (and the title) was meant to be inspiring. ;)

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  4. i feel like i'm repeating what i've already told you. it's... meh (translation: average, entertaining for a moment but nothing to go nuts over. forgettable). it's ok... sorry, but that's all i can say and stay honest (unless you want me to lie...?)

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  5. Lol!
    Funny? Yes!
    Silly? Yes!
    Would I read more? Yes!! :)

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  6. Awesome. I loved it. Esp the 'Dumbledore!'

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  7. Yes, I just loved that Dumbledore bit; the first thing coming to your mind being, 'you are alive?!!' :D

    And yes, we would like to read more. :)

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  8. And, by the way, is it true?!!!!!!!!!

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  9. Thanks... I'm working on it! :D

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