Firstly, a Poem : I've tried to be creative and use different rhythms, and not tried to use humour, cause, here, it may've been of the "forced" type, here. :-)
A Visit to Hell
One fine (??) day, I went to hell
That's right, I was dead, as well
All was cold, dark
The colours, stark
And every place had a dying smell.
I searched far and wide, for relatives and friends
But obviously, before Death, they'd made amends.
And now I was here, living in fear
(Rather, dead, without tear)
Where was everyone, where was the sun?
Where was the life, and fun?
I guess it's loneliness, that hurts us most...
Instead of living/dying/lying here,
I'd rather be a ghost.
Come again? Isn't hell Pain?
Or, a mythical creation?
No, it exists... in desolation.
Comments, as always, are welcome. :-) I hope I'm geting better at serious + creative poetry.
The other day, I was chatting with a friend from overseas. After some time, she said that the chat made her feel I was "real". She meant that I never really talked about everyday things, and talking about them this time gave me an air of reality... (which isn't always possible over the net).
That makes me wonder... I post limericks, my thoughts on some important issues, etc... but then, don't I remain true to my name, Anon-ick? Do I seem a real person? I think not.
So, I've decided to be more personal. I will comment on large issues, but I feel real life, common life, is more important and interesting. Or atleast I will try to make it so. Do tell me what you think of this idea of mine. I never did imagine my blog would one day become personal, cause I never read personal blogs... but I think it is important it does... and I'll try to read other personal blogs. The poems, and "worldly" thoughts will remain here too, of course. :D
You read the blog by Anonick? Why?
Now I know what you think (sigh)
World issues? "Bah"
Only Limericks? "Gah!"
"Hell, I don't even know if Anon's a guy!"
That's what an impersonal blog does...